I can tell that you have been using other sources for your information. Remember, if you do this, you need to include a bibliography. You also need to use quotation marks to show me where you have taken words directly from the source. Without these two things, you are plagarizing and that is bad.

Your organization needs a little work. You need a strong conclusion, perhaps expressing support for this “sport”.

In your own words, you could tell me: Who is involved? What kind of training is required? What kind of prizes are there?

I hope this is less vague, and helpful.